2 comments on “A well disguised “tell”

  1. I really struggle to see that one as fast pace when, in the opening pages the protagonist is racing away from some bad guys, and we stop for a five page languid description of the museum. o.O

    • Well that’s the trick of how it’s structured; the whole thing is characters going somewhere and then sitting and having a conversation (aka info dump) and if the conversation is a long one (which they mostly are) he cuts to the other characters who are actually in motion. Gives a wonderful impression of action without anyone really doing anything!

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