So the PAR (post apocalyptic romance, just to be clear) edit is going. And going. And gooooiiiiing.
I don’t know why I’m so surprised that I’m reworking and rewriting as much as I am, to take it to 2nd draft, but it has surprised me. Probably because I enjoyed the 1st draft so much that it didn’t feel like would want to change it to such a degree.
To date I’ve added two whole new chapters (hello 120K) and rewritten two other chapters.
Not that I’m concerned, or complaining really. It just surprises me at each step. In fact, overall, I think the edit is going pretty well. With luck I might have a nice 2nd draft by Christmas, but I’m not putting a deadline on it. I know this amount of reworking means I may well run out of steam and need to switch back to the novella series before the end!
One of the lovely things about PAR as a project is that I like spending time with these characters. It’s a pleasure to do three versions of a scene and I don’t know I’ve ever said that before.
I’ve been heavy in the editing over the past few days and it’s been a bit of slog to be honest. Not so much because the edit is hard – though I won’t call this one easy – but because I’m suffering from procrasinatitis! You know, inflammation of the procrastination muscle.
To avoid working, I have over the past two days:
- listened to podcasts
- done the dishes
- made soup
- streamed a documentary
- had a long text conversation with a friend
- created a new playlist
- blogged (hmm…)
Not that there’s anything wrong with taking a break, or getting necessary household things done, but I know that’s not why these tasks got attention. No. It was totally about avoiding the edit.
The good news is that I’m still getting some editing done. As some being better than none, I celebrate this!
In fact – while I’m looking for inspirational positives – I realised today that my productivity has been somewhat better than I thought. After editing books with short chapters for a couple of years, I’d forgotten that 4K chapters feel slooooow by comparison!
Blurty is about to have a final edit (squeeeeeeee)! But having given it to a fellow writer for a writerly look-over may have led to an unexpected consequence…
You see my reader (you know who you are) thought this was part of a series and was VERY disappointed when I said “no, it’s a stand alone”. I’d never envisaged those characters having another story – in fact, I felt that Blurt was their story.
Then… I was sitting around one lunch time at work, doodling things in my notebook when I got curious about what a further story could be and BAM! I had an idea. A good idea.
Just to check it was a good idea I ran it past my reader and she agreed! So… well… Blurty might have a ‘sister’ down the track somewhere. My first attempt at a sequel.
I know there’s at least one reader in the world who’ll want to get their hands on it!
Last week I realised it was time for me to read PAR draft I finished back in March. Dutifully, I organise a copy I could read on the train and sat down on my morning commute with it… I almost missed my stop I was so engrossed! Same thing when I decided to ‘just read a chapter’ before sleeping one night: Hello midnight!
Should I be embarrassed that I’m enjoying my own book this much? Is it a bit like laughing at your own jokes? I don’t know.
Still, it’s getting me pretty keen to start the next draft, so it’s kind of useful…
After spending a wonderful month in Scotland (a whole month!!) I’m back in Oz and back to normal life (sigh). The one nice thing about that is being back to writing and editing. I just can’t get anything much done when I travel – my brain is way too overstimulated by new and interesting environments.
Having said that I did manage to review some drafts of things while on the interminable 13 hr leg of the journey over and, on a rainy day in Glasgow, I did also find a new opening for one of the novellas which I’m very pleased about. The total word count for the month of May was a mere 1,000 words, but that was bonus productivity!
Since my feet touched home soil I think I’ve written something like 3,000 words on some random story that popped into my head the week I got back. I don’t think that story is going anywhere, but it felt good. And now I’ve got a bunch of editing lined up on the novella, I’ve had more feedback on Blurty which needs integrating and I’m feeling about ready to read the PAR draft I finished in April!
Daemon looks pleased.
My poor brain is struggling to know what to do with itself since finishing the PAR draft and this does kind of remind me of how you suddenly have time on hands when you come out of a relationship. I find myself sitting around going “what did I used to think about while weeding?” and “what did I used to do on the train?”.
Of course the writing daemon is perched on the back of the couch, grinning. He’s already got story work lined up for the brain. In fact he sent me off to look at where the three novellas were at pre-Dec 2016 and together we’ve decided they are in much better shape than we thought they were!